Virth
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~Music is Life~
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Glass
Mar 14, 2009 13:05:33 GMT -5
Post by Virth on Mar 14, 2009 13:05:33 GMT -5
Ok so I'm going to post all the poems that I showed Metz on MSN. Cuz....I'm sure some of you would like to see them. Btw, in case you don't figure it out (it is kinda confusing), In this poem, the water is supposed to represent emotions, and the glass is supposed to represent how much a person can hold. Figure out the rest. What would the fun be if you were told what the poem was supposed to be about? ------------------- GlassA clear glass, filled to the brim, with clear, cool water. The water never lowers, it just keeps raising. Spilling out of the cup, sliding down the edge, to the ground, which held the cup. The water hits the ground, breaking it apart in seconds. The shaking ground, shakes the filled cup, splashing more water, hitting the ground like acid. The process repeats, and continues, never stopping. Until eventually, the glass breaks, and the water, destroys the ground.
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taera
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Glass
Mar 16, 2009 20:24:31 GMT -5
Post by taera on Mar 16, 2009 20:24:31 GMT -5
This whole poem = really flowing and cool (no pun intended, hehe...okay, so maybe a *teensy* bit intended). The last stanza = awesomeness.
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Glass
Mar 17, 2009 7:03:37 GMT -5
Post by remylebeau on Mar 17, 2009 7:03:37 GMT -5
Virth, you sure that is water on the glass? was there like an earthquake going on in the meantime?
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Virth
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Glass
Mar 17, 2009 15:50:32 GMT -5
Post by Virth on Mar 17, 2009 15:50:32 GMT -5
lmao no...you don't get ittttt ok so the water is emotions the glass is how much you can hold i stated that up above what i didnt say was that the ground, the thing holding the cup, is the person that the emotions belong to
now when the water exceeds the amount it can hold, everything goes crazy, and the person is destroyed (metaphorically).
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Glass
Mar 30, 2009 14:02:39 GMT -5
Post by lolabelle on Mar 30, 2009 14:02:39 GMT -5
Oh wow o__o That is really strong, and can be compared to many of people's lives today :/
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