Virth
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Mar 11, 2009 22:03:23 GMT -5
Post by Virth on Mar 11, 2009 22:03:23 GMT -5
Ok so this is another one of my very few rhyming poems. uhh.. the whole thing doesn't rhyme, but like...you'll see... So yea, I wrote this when I was annoyed at peoplez, I'm sure you can tell. --------------- TiredI'm tired of life, tired of healing. Tired of love, tired of feelings. I'm tired of learning, tired of schools. Tired of idiots, tired of fools. I'm tired of couples, tired of preppies. Tired of hope, tired of hippies. But most of all, I'm tired of being alone. Because I have no one, for my feelings to be shown.
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Mar 14, 2009 13:06:43 GMT -5
Post by remylebeau on Mar 14, 2009 13:06:43 GMT -5
Nooo, it isn't pain, and not this one either, is one that you said Metzii told you to post, that one, was amazing, how many poems have you posted anyway,...=P
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Virth
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Mar 14, 2009 13:10:07 GMT -5
Post by Virth on Mar 14, 2009 13:10:07 GMT -5
a lot and there's more coming. xP
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taera
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Mar 16, 2009 20:29:26 GMT -5
Post by taera on Mar 16, 2009 20:29:26 GMT -5
I hope you don't think that by picking out my favorite parts it means that the rest of the piece is sub-par or even just "okay". My brain only lets me find favorite lines after it's the confirmed that the whole work is Frito-neato. ;D That said, your 3rd stanza = a big ball of mega-win.
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Virth
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Mar 17, 2009 15:48:13 GMT -5
Post by Virth on Mar 17, 2009 15:48:13 GMT -5
lol it's the jokish stanza they all have a general tone 1st stanza = sadness 2nd stanza = anger 3rd stanza = joking around 4th stanza = serious
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