Post by Virth on Mar 18, 2009 22:30:40 GMT -5
Ok so a while ago I was writing a novel...out of boredom...
Though I got bored and stopped, but here is the ending I made for it.
Yes, the story isn't finished, but the ending doesn't rely on it TOO much.
If you don't get something, please feel free to ask questions.
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I turned around and left, a dark and horrible feeling washing over me. I knew what I had to do, and I had done it. This was something I never wanted to have to do again, I lost a part of me from it. Though, if I hadn't, then he would be at constant risk of being held hostage again. For his safety, I had to destroy myself, which left only a slight part of me left. The part of me that remained was hollow and emotionless.
My entire personality had been locked away, and I let him, whatever he goes by, take over. I let him control my body, and make decisions; he wasn't like me, so he wouldn't think about emotions before taking a step. This person inside of me, who was originally a demon, a monster that I was made to fear, was my last chance of survival. I could no longer hold myself up, not after what I had just done, and I would no longer be able to live daily without destroying myself.
Darkness took over my body, and I watched from a distance as my faced changed from despair into a hollow state. It was indeed a disgusting feeling, watching someone else control your body. But I gave that person complete control, and I stayed in my little cell, locked away inside the dead part of my brain. After I harshly broke up with Josh, I didn't want to live. I wanted to just take it all back, to run back into his arms and apologize. But if I did that, he would be used against me, and it would be worse to watch him die in front of me. I couldn't even turn back and look at his broken face, it would hurt too much.
Ah, the simple struggle of love. Even after the extremely long battle to win the feeling over, it is once again destroyed. Though, it is destroyed by itself, for itself.
Darkness covered my eyes as I blocked out the vision of the outside world. Nothing mattered to me anymore.
"Wake me up when the time is right," I thought to him.
"Are you kidding? This body is mine now."
Good.
I turned myself off.
It was good while it lasted.
Though I got bored and stopped, but here is the ending I made for it.
Yes, the story isn't finished, but the ending doesn't rely on it TOO much.
If you don't get something, please feel free to ask questions.
---------------
I turned around and left, a dark and horrible feeling washing over me. I knew what I had to do, and I had done it. This was something I never wanted to have to do again, I lost a part of me from it. Though, if I hadn't, then he would be at constant risk of being held hostage again. For his safety, I had to destroy myself, which left only a slight part of me left. The part of me that remained was hollow and emotionless.
My entire personality had been locked away, and I let him, whatever he goes by, take over. I let him control my body, and make decisions; he wasn't like me, so he wouldn't think about emotions before taking a step. This person inside of me, who was originally a demon, a monster that I was made to fear, was my last chance of survival. I could no longer hold myself up, not after what I had just done, and I would no longer be able to live daily without destroying myself.
Darkness took over my body, and I watched from a distance as my faced changed from despair into a hollow state. It was indeed a disgusting feeling, watching someone else control your body. But I gave that person complete control, and I stayed in my little cell, locked away inside the dead part of my brain. After I harshly broke up with Josh, I didn't want to live. I wanted to just take it all back, to run back into his arms and apologize. But if I did that, he would be used against me, and it would be worse to watch him die in front of me. I couldn't even turn back and look at his broken face, it would hurt too much.
Ah, the simple struggle of love. Even after the extremely long battle to win the feeling over, it is once again destroyed. Though, it is destroyed by itself, for itself.
Darkness covered my eyes as I blocked out the vision of the outside world. Nothing mattered to me anymore.
"Wake me up when the time is right," I thought to him.
"Are you kidding? This body is mine now."
Good.
I turned myself off.
It was good while it lasted.
